The capri cave.
The capri cave is a rough boat ride. The blue water glows in the cave, the cave looks like there are some glowing lights underneath the blue looking water. The cave is big enough for people to canoe in and swim in.the water splashes on the hard rock like a tornado splashing on the concrete. Sometimes the water splashes the water splashes on the side of the hard brown rock and sometimes wets inside your canoe and you.It is really cool how they sing in the capri cave because you can hear your voice echo as you sing and it is really fun. When it is sunny the sun shines through the cave and the blue fresh water begins to be lighter. When you are boat riding you can hear the water splashes against the rocks.In the capri cave you can swim in the fresh blue water. The water in the capri cave can be warm/cold and fresh when you feel the glowing water. Up the cave when you look up it glows darker than the fresh water. As you canoe the water rushes across smoothly
hey! Tino it's me Khwan I really like your writing but there's one problem... there is not much full stops im really happy to help you anytime just tell me:)
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hi tino,
ReplyDeleteone thing i like about the capri cave is how the blue looks like its glowing.
another thing i really like about your writing is how you described it for example,capri cave is a rough boat ride.
maybe you should try putting more full stops?
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